And I'm from Australia and I came to Korea last year.
I love to cook because I'm happy that someone else is eating my food happily.
I went to 11 cities....
I went to Perth, Melbourne, Sydney, Singapore, Beijing, Seoul, Chung-ju, Jeju island, Gwang-ju, Malaysia, and Mok-po.
My favorite food is chicken and I really like pizza too. I like coka-cola and I like ice-cream for desert after the meal.
GOALS
GOAL 1. Get as many Green cards as possible in
GLPS.
STEP 1. Always speak, think and dream the english.
STEP 2. Always clean up the room.
GOAL 2. Make my mom and Dad really happy about me.
STEP 1. Study well.
STEP 2. Read many books.
GOAL 3. Read 20 books to entertain myself .
STEP 1. Get interest in books.
STEP 2. Especially trying to understand the books.
Your goals were to be written out and explained, but what you did was just present a list of goals and steps. You need to write in sentences what your goals are and how you will achieve them.
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