In the afternoon, all students in Korea 12years old were
studying in their classroom.
But suddenly the windows were broken and
the robber came in, and said "put your hands up, or otherwise I will shoot
the gun right into you guys head!"
Everyone putted their hands up, but one
boy didn't put his hands up.
His name was "Reeky".
Everyone was surprised because Reeky
really hates robbers or like ghost like that.
But robber didn't see him because he was
at the back of the room.
What he was doing was call to the police .
That time robber saw the Reeky is calling
to the police, so the robber took the phone from him and trying to hit him.
But when the robber was trying to hit him
he wasn't there, he went to the back again and tried call to police again.
But the robber found the Reeky is trying
to call to police again and now the robber really hits him.
A girl saw that really seriously so, so
she get out of the classroom quietly and secretly and called to the police.
5minutes later, the police came. The
robber heard the sound of the police car so he was tried to run away.
But the Reeky hold his leg so he couldn't
go out and he went to the police officer with Reeky and policeman.
He said that his mom is really sick now so
she is in hospital but they are really poor so he was tried to still.
There were many computers so he was tried
to steal that.
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But Reeky wants him to just go out and live well.
So he live well now and he is working so he has a lot of money.
Also Reeky received the award from the police station.
And the robber’s mother is not in hospital now she lives well I the house, and robber and Reeky become a good friend after that happened.
He promised that he will change the windows that he had broke.
Now everyone live happy now and they are all just happy.Click here for ending 1
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Nice pictures!
ReplyDeleteThe structure of the story is well organized good job :) However, I cannot see clearly where the conflict is in your story. Also, some of the endings reiterate the same context from the body part.
ReplyDeletefun story!!
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